That really did creep me out. it was a very interesting story, but i did sort of wish it had a better ending than monsters eating her. I like endings left to my imagination, so i think a great ending would be to put her at the edge of the forest and sit down, wondering what to do (whether to let the monsters eat her, or to face her fear o f leaving and finally leave) finally she gets up and stars walking way from the forest. then it's the end. that way you'll have plenty of fanfictions for this!
Just my idea o you don't have to use it (i have a broken collarbone so sorry if some things are mispelled.